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lol, im not really emo, i leik the pic though so im keeping it

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a news post story!

Posted by brayofden May. 4, 2008 @ 10:49 PM EDT

Well, flashplayer5
's making one, so ill make one too!

People in so far
Spaghetti14 as leader of robbers
Jesus-Owns-X as leader of saviors
Grammer as robber 1
cabbster as robber 2
straightedgesupersta as citesen 1
flashplayer5 as cop chief
dondontommy as savior 1
tayspren as robber 3
daydreamblvr as savior 2
chris-the-stick2 as savior 3
darknessthehedgehog as savior 4
wjimmyw as robber 4
note: there are cops, robbers, saviors, and citisens

Ideas
wjimmyw throws a duck at tomfulp
note: the main idea is robbers invadeing toms home and stealling the pico day reward money

only 25 people can enter

Chapter one
It was a dark cloudy day. Tomfulp was wondering who are the winners of the pico day contest. "Stupid." Tomfulp said. "Shit". Then he was looking at the house of a 1000 cats flash. "............:0 this is it" and he told wade to wake up, get some underwear on, and stop eating burritos... and to help him count the money. but then jhonnyutah came in and said tom was due for another naked pic of him. he went down. and two robbers climbed in "see?" said grammer "i told you, 10000 dollars!" "whatever" said spaghetti14. "lets call my gang.". then footsteps came from the stairs. "you said no one was home!" yelled spaghetti14. "well... lets hide until the gang comes!" suggested grammer. so they hid under wades bed (they almost died of stench under there) tom came back up and started sorting out the reward money again. then a smug looking car parked IN the building. and the door of tom and wades apartment almost broke down (yes in this story they live in an apartment on the 20th floor. but its a big one VERY big.)

Chapter 2
Meanwhile a few miles away, "c'mon!" said jesus-owns-x. "weve been wanting to see tomfulp!". "no!" said dondontommy "he wont get rid of the mods!" "so?" said jesus-owns-x "were not on ng right now, we're in real life!" "fine" said dondontommy. meanwhile at ng base tomfulp, jhonnyutah, and bob were tied to a chair and wade was taped to a beanbag. "mm!MHMHMMH!!!!!!!" yelled tom with tape on his mouth.
"SHUT UP!" yelled grammer. "youre giving me a headache!" and the cops found out about the heist when grammer yelled that "you are surrounded!" yelled flashplayer5, the chief. "WTF GRAMMER!!!????" yelled spaghetti14 "grab the money and hurry! yelled cabbster. "im the leader here i call the shots!" said spaghetti14 then a gun shot the door. "grab the money and hurry!" yelled spaghetti14 then grammer said "we dont need to" then he pulled out a shotgun. "where the f*ck did you get that?" asked cabbster? "no time" said grammer and when the cops blew the door down, grammer blew them down. and flashplayer5 came back with a rocket launcher, he blasted cabbster. "cabbster!" yelled grammer and he blasted flashplayer5. "oh no" said tayspren. "i have his lungs in my underwear." he said.

Chapter 3
meanwhile the future saviors were on their way to NG base when they saw the police. they went in anyways. everybody was dead. corpses everywhere.
"holy shit." said jesus-owns-x "hey dondontommy, dont you have some former cop friends?" he asked "yeah" said dondontommy "why?" "call them" said jesus-owns-x
NOTE: chapter 3 still in progress

Updated: 05/08/08 8:06 PM Log in to comment! | Share this!

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22 Comments

May. 4, 2008 | 11:11 PM ijustowndU says:

yo!

May. 4, 2008 | 11:21 PM brayofden responds:

hello ijustowndu wanna be in the story?
(i need people)
and if your wondering why youre not banned from posting on my news posts anymore, its cus i no longer hate you (as i said on my freeweb)

Updated: May. 4, 2008, 11:22 PM

May. 4, 2008 | 11:16 PM ngfan14 says:

What happened to your other posts?

May. 4, 2008 | 11:21 PM brayofden responds:

i deleted all of them
wanna be in my story?

Updated: May. 4, 2008, 11:23 PM

May. 4, 2008 | 11:38 PM Spaghetti14 says:

I must be in your story.
I want to be the sexy protagonist who gets the baibz in the end and teaches everybody a valuable lesson.

May. 5, 2008 | 12:37 AM brayofden responds:

no
ill make yo a robber


May. 4, 2008 | 11:38 PM Jesus-Owns-X says:

I would like to be the hero that saves them

May. 5, 2008 | 12:38 AM brayofden responds:

you mean ONE of em
theres more then one hero but since you asked first ill make you the leader


May. 4, 2008 | 11:51 PM ijustowndU says:

We'll, I'm un-banned and all, but no thanks.

May. 5, 2008 | 12:38 AM brayofden responds:

m'kay
actully i need just one more robber to finish chapter one. you dont have to do anything i just put your name in the text

Updated: May. 5, 2008, 12:58 AM

May. 5, 2008 | 1:18 AM Grammer says:

May I enter?

May. 5, 2008 | 1:22 AM brayofden responds:

sure youre a robber cus i need one to finish chapter one


May. 5, 2008 | 1:52 AM Cabbster says:

waddup, stick me in that wall of text, i want in.

May. 5, 2008 | 6:56 PM brayofden responds:

okay a robber


May. 5, 2008 | 2:01 AM StraightEdgeSupersta says:

Can I BE A CITEZEN? oops srry about caps

May. 5, 2008 | 6:56 PM brayofden responds:

yes


May. 5, 2008 | 11:35 AM flashplayer5 says:

Can I get a part? C'mon, I gave you one!

May. 5, 2008 | 6:55 PM brayofden responds:

okay youll be a savior


May. 5, 2008 | 11:59 AM flashplayer5 says:

Preferably a cop part 'cuz I <3 cop movies.

May. 5, 2008 | 6:56 PM brayofden responds:

okay changed to cop


May. 5, 2008 | 6:24 PM cactuar12 says:

Im ready the olny problem is I dont have a thing to make flash animation but I can help and give some ideas man so shout out to me

May. 5, 2008 | 6:56 PM brayofden responds:

its a text story


May. 5, 2008 | 9:14 PM tayspren says:

i want to be in

May. 5, 2008 | 10:11 PM brayofden responds:

ok my little brother
i making my brother a robber


May. 5, 2008 | 9:48 PM flashplayer5 says:

YAY! I'm the police chief! Now i get to shout at people!

May. 5, 2008 | 10:10 PM brayofden responds:

YAY!!!


May. 5, 2008 | 11:10 PM DaydreamBlvr says:

I would like to be in the story. I would like to play the part of the shiny brass latch on the briefcase containing the money. Secretly resentful that I was made into a brass latch instead of a glorious pico day trophy, I refuse to allow anyone to open the breifcase.

May. 6, 2008 | 12:02 AM brayofden responds:

okay, what is with you? youre a savior


May. 6, 2008 | 12:32 AM chris-the-stick2 says:

i wanna be a good guy stuff

May. 7, 2008 | 4:53 PM brayofden responds:

im saying you mean a savior


May. 6, 2008 | 12:32 AM chris-the-stick2 says:

with epic speeches, and sword stuff

May. 7, 2008 | 4:53 PM brayofden responds:

well this isnt a medievel story so not a sword. ill give you a knife or somthing though


May. 7, 2008 | 12:53 PM darknessthehedgehog says:

hey im just wondering can i be the hero?

May. 7, 2008 | 4:52 PM brayofden responds:

if you mean the leader, thats taken, but one of his friends who helps him, yeah

Updated: May. 7, 2008, 4:54 PM

May. 7, 2008 | 5:00 PM brayofden says:

edit: ill pm the people who are in it when a new chapter opens starting when chapter 3 is done)


May. 7, 2008 | 5:05 PM randomgames says:

I know! I'll be God!

May. 7, 2008 | 5:26 PM brayofden responds:

just for that ur being a robber


May. 8, 2008 | 3:01 AM wjimmyw says:

can i throw a duck at tom fulp in it?

May. 8, 2008 | 8:04 PM brayofden responds:

lol your a robber that does that


May. 8, 2008 | 11:11 AM darknessthehedgehog says:

i meant like to be a hero when the saviors are in trouble an unknown person appears to help them

but its you story not mine im already making my 2nd story

May. 8, 2008 | 8:04 PM brayofden responds:

hmmm i guess maybe

Updated: May. 8, 2008, 8:04 PM

May. 9, 2008 | 12:14 PM darknessthehedgehog says:

well let me know when you have decided!

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